Once upon a time their was a girl named Aime and she loved to cheer. Robert and Julie were her adoptive parents and were so proud of her of how good she was at cheerleading. Aime loved to be a cheerleader because, it was a mix of things she enjoyed to do. Its a combination of gymnastics, dancing and stepping which is what she enjoys about it. Aime just loves when people call her Aime "the cheerleader" Jones, it always puts a huge smile on her face. Cheerleading means the world to Aime and it would hurt her so much if she wouldnt be able to do it anymore. Aime is going off to High school to become better at cheerleading, so that she will be able to go to Ramapo collage which is her dream collage. Aime is super duper excited and just cant wait to start!
"Mom, dad im leaving to school wish me luck i love you guys" Aime shouted to her parents while she rushes to grab her stuff and leave out the door.
" Good luck honey we love you, and hope you have a nice day" Julie replied as she waves to her daughter goodbye. As Aime rushes to the bus stop she wonder How will school be like? and How will the cheer squad be like? While rushing to the bus stop she runs into someone "Clashhhhhhhhh!"
" Hey could you watch where your going you knocked down my playdough model, do you know how long that took me to make?" Shouted an angrily girl Aime just ran into.
" I'm so sorry i really didn't mean too, here i will take it home and fix it for you. It will be fixed by tomorrow, i promise" Aime said
" Hey dont worry about it ,its fine. My name is Aurora by the way, you going to Emerson High?"
"yeah and I'm Aime nice to meet you Aurora wana have luch together today?"
"Sure i would love to come lets get on the bus before if leaves us behind" Aurora answerd
Aime walks through the doors and just falls in love with the school its like she had a good vibe about it right away. Aime goes to her first class and she loves it. Second class and she loves it, and for the rest of the day she just loved it. The day ends and Aime meets up with Aurora...
"Hey have you tried this...dont tell anyone i gave you this okay and you cant eat more than one a day okay, if not you dont know what will happen" Aurora whispered to Aime
"What is it?" Aime said confusingly
"Its called chocolate, it makes you feel so good and full of energy maybe it can help with having lots of energy for cheerleading" Aurora said
"okay yea sure, i have to go to tryouts anyway rite now so let me have it" Aime responded
On her way to the gym she felt so good and happy she already started loving chocolate and did great at her tryouts. Tomorrow they will let her know if she will be a flyer or a side. Aime starts to think if she eats lots of chocolate everyday she will get better and better, she knows by eating something that makes you feel good and looks good cant harm you... but shes wrong. Everyday before practice she ate 3 bars of chocolate since they dont sell them in stores she gets them from Aurora. Not knowing slowly, by slowly she gained weight and started to become sick.Shes a flyer and flyers are NOT FAT. Julie and Robert start to see Aime and how she is getting sick and fat, they dont know what is causing such a thing. So they decide to take her to the doctor saying shes just getting a check up, but they lied. Lieing isnt right but they did it so that their daughter can get better. When the doctor checked her out he knew right away what was wrong with her. She has become a chocoholic, which isn't good. Being a chocoholic means that you are addicted to chocolate and being addicted means that your body will soon be slower and not work the way it used to be. Aimes world came down on top of her and she started to cry, she thought it would have made her feel better and become better but it didnt. Now shes not able to do the thing she loves for a long time.
One month passed and Aime is at a Hospital for Chocoholics and sits on her bed thinking how much she misses being a cheerleader. As she sits she says to herself "Oh, my how i wish i could cheer, i want to so badly"
A nurse walks in and says "In about two days you will be the cheerleader you used to be", then a smile grows on her pale face and brightens up her day!
THE END
Wednesday, December 15, 2010
Sunday, December 12, 2010
Authors note
Authors Note:
Thousands of people all over the nation, are getting affected by cigarettes also the non smokers too.Even if the smokers are smoking around the people who are not, the other people can get sick by just inhaling the smoke caused by the cigarette. Smokers are getting sick and more sick by every cigarette they smoke. If people quit smoking i guarantee that the death rate of smokers will go down. Its very hard to quit, because one you smoke one, you want to smoke another. Its not your fault, because this is cause by the nicotine within the cigarette.I lost my grandmother two years ago to lung cancer. she has been smoking ever since she was 14 and quit when she was 67 and it was 3 months before her death. Of course our family was devastated and hurt very bad by this loss.
In my story chocolate represents the cigarettes and how they are very addicting. The coco in the chocolate represents the nicotine within the chocolate. So how my main character Domo tries chocolate and cannot stop eating it, because he is addicted to it. Domo represents the smoker in my story. As a result he gets sick and cannot do the activities used to doe when he didnt eat chocolate at all.
This story came out of my feelings, my grandmother who has passed inspired me to write this, because i want the nation to quit because a loss is the most hurtful thing that could happen to a person. Especially when they are related to you. I love you grandma < Teresa Rodriguez Dec22 1942- Dec 2008>
Thousands of people all over the nation, are getting affected by cigarettes also the non smokers too.Even if the smokers are smoking around the people who are not, the other people can get sick by just inhaling the smoke caused by the cigarette. Smokers are getting sick and more sick by every cigarette they smoke. If people quit smoking i guarantee that the death rate of smokers will go down. Its very hard to quit, because one you smoke one, you want to smoke another. Its not your fault, because this is cause by the nicotine within the cigarette.I lost my grandmother two years ago to lung cancer. she has been smoking ever since she was 14 and quit when she was 67 and it was 3 months before her death. Of course our family was devastated and hurt very bad by this loss.
In my story chocolate represents the cigarettes and how they are very addicting. The coco in the chocolate represents the nicotine within the chocolate. So how my main character Domo tries chocolate and cannot stop eating it, because he is addicted to it. Domo represents the smoker in my story. As a result he gets sick and cannot do the activities used to doe when he didnt eat chocolate at all.
This story came out of my feelings, my grandmother who has passed inspired me to write this, because i want the nation to quit because a loss is the most hurtful thing that could happen to a person. Especially when they are related to you. I love you grandma < Teresa Rodriguez Dec22 1942- Dec 2008>
Saturday, November 27, 2010
Research project #1 Smoking= research on how it may affect parents
I think as the death rate for lung disease goes up, more and more kids become orphans. They become orphans either because both parents smoked. Mostly their parents would smoke more than a pack of cigarettes a day, Which may have caused the lung disease. Since lung disease kills many of theses parents who die usually leave their babies behind and maybe more than a baby a family behind. These kids usually end up rphans without anyone their for them, especially their parents.
Parents dont realize that when they smoke they and their child bloth have posibilities of getting serioudly bad health risks.One may include phemonia, and lung cancer too. Secondhand smoking is as dangerous as smoking itself, because not only is it like inhaling the smoke you actally are inhaling it.Parents also end up affecting their child this way and it isn't very nice.To help avoid this i wouls just as a parent be responsible and find ways to quit smoking. Not only for me but for my child who i do not want to hurt and who i may not want to leave them alone.
Parents dont realize that when they smoke they and their child bloth have posibilities of getting serioudly bad health risks.One may include phemonia, and lung cancer too. Secondhand smoking is as dangerous as smoking itself, because not only is it like inhaling the smoke you actally are inhaling it.Parents also end up affecting their child this way and it isn't very nice.To help avoid this i wouls just as a parent be responsible and find ways to quit smoking. Not only for me but for my child who i do not want to hurt and who i may not want to leave them alone.
Social Awareness project #3
Song name: Freedom by Paul McCartney
"This is my right, my right given by god"
This song is directed to people having equal rights.How people of differnt races should be living "freedom".This song has so much meaning, not only freedom, but how "hope" can also be given to those who are trying to get freedom for whatever reason. It could be getting the freedom to not get discriminated for being gay or lesbian and or the freedom to be what ever you desire.
This song was based off of the civil war and how racism was a big issue. The creator of this song paul mccartney wanted just to adress "Freedom"to all other than just racism, because more than racisim happend around the time period of when this song was written. This song has special meaning other than the title freedom: its mostly its mostly saying that peace should be brought upon us. The world should just have no more war, they should just make peace. It actually makes sense when you hear the song, and every time you could just come up with a new sub topic all the time.Thats why in response to this song i say it really shows it can really teach you about the problems of the country and how his words can describe how we and many people feel.
"This is my right, my right given by god"
This song is directed to people having equal rights.How people of differnt races should be living "freedom".This song has so much meaning, not only freedom, but how "hope" can also be given to those who are trying to get freedom for whatever reason. It could be getting the freedom to not get discriminated for being gay or lesbian and or the freedom to be what ever you desire.
This song was based off of the civil war and how racism was a big issue. The creator of this song paul mccartney wanted just to adress "Freedom"to all other than just racism, because more than racisim happend around the time period of when this song was written. This song has special meaning other than the title freedom: its mostly its mostly saying that peace should be brought upon us. The world should just have no more war, they should just make peace. It actually makes sense when you hear the song, and every time you could just come up with a new sub topic all the time.Thats why in response to this song i say it really shows it can really teach you about the problems of the country and how his words can describe how we and many people feel.
Sunday, November 14, 2010
Sociala Awareness project #2
Poem Response: Animal Cruelty
Pain can be felt by anyone,
including an animal.
Just like a human they have feelings which is inside their bodies,
hidden away in their own little minds.
When bad people mistreat them or, hurt them in any way
they cannot fight back or defend them selfs just like a tiny little baby.
Tears run down my face knowing poor little defenseless animals are being mistreated everyday.
Tears wouldn't do anything.
Taking action and putting the bad guys to a place where they get treated like an animal that was mistreated by them.
Its what they deserve.
Pain can be felt by anyone including an animal.
Source:
http://www.aspca.org/fight-animal-cruelty/
Pain can be felt by anyone,
including an animal.
Just like a human they have feelings which is inside their bodies,
hidden away in their own little minds.
When bad people mistreat them or, hurt them in any way
they cannot fight back or defend them selfs just like a tiny little baby.
Tears run down my face knowing poor little defenseless animals are being mistreated everyday.
Tears wouldn't do anything.
Taking action and putting the bad guys to a place where they get treated like an animal that was mistreated by them.
Its what they deserve.
Pain can be felt by anyone including an animal.
Source:
http://www.aspca.org/fight-animal-cruelty/
Wednesday, November 10, 2010
Thursday, October 28, 2010
Reading response #6 "expanding on a note"
A Note to remember!
One note i remember writing in Bridge to Terabithia was on pages 68-69 where i wrote :" this is kind of reminds me of Charlotte web. Leslie reminds me of Charlotte, i can tell they are a little alike, because of their attitudes.Both of the characters have strong personalities and always like to help the other characters. Also both of them like really don't care about what other people think about them. They are also smart, and both are very good at playing tricks on people. It is also weird how both of the characters die in the book also.
Both of the characters also helped the characters surrounding them like Charlotte and Wilbur. In bridge to Terabithia its Leslie and Jess who are the main characters who help each other. The people they both helped end up becoming stronger, by their death, because they are learning the ways of the "leaders" as i called them.
One note i remember writing in Bridge to Terabithia was on pages 68-69 where i wrote :" this is kind of reminds me of Charlotte web. Leslie reminds me of Charlotte, i can tell they are a little alike, because of their attitudes.Both of the characters have strong personalities and always like to help the other characters. Also both of them like really don't care about what other people think about them. They are also smart, and both are very good at playing tricks on people. It is also weird how both of the characters die in the book also.
Both of the characters also helped the characters surrounding them like Charlotte and Wilbur. In bridge to Terabithia its Leslie and Jess who are the main characters who help each other. The people they both helped end up becoming stronger, by their death, because they are learning the ways of the "leaders" as i called them.
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